Happiness! The mischievous butterfly
So Soft, colorful and vibrant
Trying hard to engage every single eye
Everyone so eager to chase you
All I can give you is, a dim glimpse & deep sigh
I have tired enough to attempt a chase
I stand still as I have given it enough of try
Your colors still get embossed in my eye-crystals
But I understand I couldn’t reach that high
Your li’l presence at times, reminds me of the days
When I would sit alone, waiting for you and I would cry
I have been a compulsive follower of yours
It is one of the truths that I can not deny
Though you never even cared to stop and notice
I never had wings like you, so that I could fly
Sometimes I wish you could’ve stopped-by for a moment
It just took too long to know that without you I won’t die
As I have understood that you aren’t meant to last forever
I wish you a great soar, as you have with you, the entire sky
Nice read, the mood build up is good and the underlying sentiment is nicely etched.
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DeEpAK KaRtHiK,
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tc
that was a beautiful post :)
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niya
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ahaan! it was subtle and natural poetic style that got me glued. like this space.
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Raniyal Niyada
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Maverick,
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I hope you have plans to conduct frequent visits to my blog-place..
well, as long as the beautiful confusions bleed inside my mind.. you expect a lot of such stuff on this place..
thanks for stopping by.. welcome.. :)